Monday, March 8, 2010
The Stupid and Wise
What if I told you that today is your last day, or that tomorrow will be the best day of your life. Would you understand what I mean or just let it go in one ear and out the other. There are many people in this world who act without thinking and then regret it or are really proud of what they did.
If there is a kid who sees a cool looking plant or an interesting bug do you think they will stop and think of what will happen when they touch it, instead like most people they will take their chances with just going for it even if it looks painful or poisonous. It doesn’t matter who you are and if you are smart or dumb, every one makes decisions good and bad. Even the old and wise, like Santiago from the Old Man in the Sea.
One of the choices the old man made was not letting the boy, Manolin, go with him to catch the marlin. Throughout the book he keeps saying “I wish the boy was here,” (50).
He felt lonely on his journey and if he could go back and let the boy come he probably would. Without the boy there he would talk to himself and would say how he seemed crazy. And he knows that it would of helped a lot to have the boy there when he hooked the fish and when he was about to catch it. If the old man was to look back I think he would have liked to change that decision. Just in general what’s the fun of an adventure without a friend.
Another choice he made was not bringing enough food and water. He knew before hand that this could be a special day. Also as a just in case thing you should bring extra food and water so if something was to happen. He was not being very wise with the fact of that he was still holding onto the fish still pulling the boat and having to get ready other fish to eat is much work.
“They were fresh and hard and he laid them side by side and dropped the guts and the gills over the stern.” (78). If something was to happen with the fish he could of lost him. And I believe that he would have regretted losing the fish for the rest of his life.
He also didn’t bring backup weapons. Which he should of thought about when going out on the sea there are many dangers in which weapons may help greatly. Also if some of the things were old there is a change that some could break. And he needed to use them he should of know that he may not get them back. “Now the bad time is coming and I do not even have the harpoon.” (103).
You can see how this is threatening to him and how this will cause him to be tense. And that choice could have also lost him his life as well. Where if he had a little less energy or more sharks had attacked at once there his life would have been done. That was a decision that put his life at risk.
The last choice that basically caused everything else is about catching the fish and not giving it up. In general he feels sad and sympathetic for the fish. “Perhaps it was a sin to kill the fish.” (105) He even said sorry to the fish many times.
The fish is what caused the other problems like the weapons breaking, getting lost and not having enough food. He may be passionate about fishing but in this end he basically went thru all the trouble for nothing. But he made this choice for a reason as for himself. And made himself feel good for doing what he did. So he was probably mentally proud and upset.
Looking back on things you think about the decisions and consequences that had followed. Either good or bad you have to live with the choices you make every day. No matter who you are we all make mistakes. But what makes us different is if you thought about what you were doing before you do it. It could be the difference between you or someone else coming out alive or dying.
Think before you go out to a party and have a beer, think before you say yes to a stranger, or even before you eat that piece of cake. It can make a difference just like if Santiago thought about if he was to catch that fish or if he was to run into trouble. Would you really want to be alone when something was about to go wrong. Think before and give yourself a heads up to what might happen so you have an idea to what you might want to do first.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
1. The thesis was the desicions that we all have to make in life and the problems that they present.
ReplyDelete2. I liked the “I wish the boy was here,” (50). quote because it directly supported the authors point. It said what she wanted to and someone who had never read the book would be able to understand it.
3. I think that the best part of this essay was how the author stuck to the point of the whole essay and didn't stray from the intended topic.
4. I think that he weakest point of this essay is word choice and organization. if it flowed better and used more interesting words it would be easier to read.
I. Althought the thesis is split up a litlle bit I like it. It clearly states that you will be talking about some of the decisions that Santiago made.
ReplyDeleteII. The first quote was best integrated into the story (it fits). You should model your other ones after that one.
III. I like the way you explain things really carefully, and most importantly the reasons why he did some of the things he did.
IV. I think the essay could be space out a little. In class today Mr. BG talked about having smaller paragraphs and that "white" (or blue) space is good and it helps the reader absorb the information a little.